February 4

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Building Deep Characters

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If you want to write a novel readers can’t put down, you need characters they can’t forget.

Character development isn’t just about creating backstories or deciding what your protagonist looks like—it’s about understanding their emotional depth, what drives them, and how they evolve over the course of the story.

Today, we’re diving into The Character Compass, a framework designed to help you craft characters with real emotional stakes. Whether you’re writing romance, fantasy, thrillers, or contemporary fiction, these four core questions will guide your character’s transformation—making your story richer and more engaging.

Grab your notebook (or open that AI assistant), and let’s build characters your readers will love.

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Why Character Development is Your Story’s Foundation

Your story isn’t just about what happens—it’s about who it happens to and why it matters.

A strong protagonist makes your plot more meaningful. Their internal struggles should mirror the external events of the story, creating tension that keeps readers invested.

Before plotting, take time to refine your character’s emotional arc. Whether you’re writing manually or using AI, these questions will help you understand who your protagonist is and how they change.

These are the four questions that will serve as your Character Compass:

  • Who do they pretend to be vs. who they truly are?
  • How will they change over the course of the story?
  • What do they fear losing?
  • What is forcing them to change?

1. Who Do They Pretend to Be vs. Who They Truly Are?

Every character has a surface identity—the face they show the world. But beneath that is their true self, often buried under fear, past trauma, or societal expectations.

For example, a character might pretend they don’t believe in love, keeping things casual and never getting too close. But deep down, they want to love—they’re just terrified of losing themselves in the process.

This contrast between their fake self and true self is the foundation of their emotional journey.

Questions to explore:

  • How do they present themselves to the world?
  • What’s their deepest truth?
  • How does the story force them to confront it?

By the end of your novel, their surface identity should crumble, revealing their authentic self.

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2. How Will They Change?

Your protagonist starts the story with a belief about themselves or the world that holds them back. The plot should challenge this belief, forcing them to grow.

For instance, if they believe “love makes people weak,” the events of the story should prove the opposite—showing them that love requires strength, trust, and vulnerability.

Ask yourself:

  • What false belief do they have about love, power, success, or themselves?
  • What must they learn to grow?
  • Who have they become by the end?

This change should feel organic, unfolding gradually across key moments in your story.

3. What Do They Fear Losing?

Fear is what keeps your protagonist from changing. It’s what makes them resist love, adventure, power—whatever your story is leading them toward.

Every character has something they’re desperate to protect. It could be their independence, control, pride, or safety. The story’s job is to make them risk exactly that.

Questions to consider:

  • What do they think they can’t afford to lose?
  • What past experience made them fear this?
  • How does this fear create conflict?

For example, a character might push people away because they fear losing their independence, just like their mother did in an unhappy marriage.

Their journey isn’t just about falling in love—it’s about dismantling the lie they’ve been telling themselves.

By the climax, they must choose between their fear and the life they truly want.

👩🏾‍💻  You’ll see me work through these steps using AI in the Demonstration video on Substack. HERE.

Building Deeper Characters

4. What Is Forcing Them to Change?

Characters don’t change on their own. They need an external force pushing them out of their comfort zone.

It could be:

  • A love interest who challenges them.
  • An antagonist who forces them to confront their fears.
  • A life-altering event that makes staying the same impossible.

The key here?

Your protagonist won’t change without a fight. They will resist, push back, and cling to their old self—until something forces them to face the truth.

Ask yourself:

  • What unexpected event shakes up their world?
  • How does the love interest (or antagonist) challenge their beliefs?
  • What moment makes them realize they can’t stay the same?

Your story’s biggest emotional payoff comes when they finally let go of who they were and step into who they’re meant to be.

Bringing It All Together

By answering these four questions, you create a clear emotional arc for your protagonist:

  • Who they pretend to be vs. who they truly are.
  • How they will change.
  • What they fear losing.
  • What forces them to change.

Every scene in your novel should reinforce or challenge these elements. If a scene doesn’t contribute to their transformation, reconsider its purpose.

Closing Thoughts

Hey, take a moment to appreciate how far you’ve come. You’re not just creating a character—you’re shaping the heart of your story.

By exploring their fears, transformation, and emotional depth, you’ve laid the groundwork for a novel that will resonate with readers. Every choice you’ve made here strengthens the emotional stakes and ensures your protagonist’s journey feels real and impactful.

The process of refining a character’s arc is both an art and a strategy. It’s about balancing what feels authentic with what keeps readers engaged—and that’s exactly what you’ve done.

Be patient with yourself.

Every layer you add makes your story more immersive, more powerful, and more unforgettable.


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Outlining, Plotting, Story Development, Substack, Writing


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